almost
great idea and melody!!!
but the quality should be better, it feels too much sampled
especially the strings, they feel unrealistic and are a little disturbing because of that
you used the same samples over and over, wich make them loose their feelings and makes the strings feel unconnected...
good luck!!!
Yeah. its because if I use to many different strings I get screechy noises.. But it will improve as soon as I get a 64-bit OS and can use all my RAM.
cant stay still, it gives me too much energy :P
the melody is very very very alike a song named 'sunshine'
if been looking for that song for a veeeery long time and still havent found who made it :'(
if you know how the artist is called could you please tell me!!!
the song i look for has the same melody (only more basic), it starts with piano, it gives a tropical beach feeling, and has simple vocals which is like 'hey ma ma ma ha hey' or somthing like that, a lot slower then this, and the name of the song is sunshine...
all i need is the artist
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this is a great song
very happy and energic
the melody might be based on another song, but still it doesnt feel like a remix it feels like a song on its own
i would like to hear this while playing mario kart!!!
going to check more from you!!!
Kill4peace
Hi there! hm, ive never heard of, or heard the song "sunshine" im afraid :/
But thank you! :D
why!?! :'(
beginning is worth a 9 or 10... (some notes could be better and less repetive... but its great so i dont care much about it)
but the end totally doesnt fit to the beginning!!! its ruining the song for me... and the beginning yust doesnt work together with rest, its like 2 different demos glued together by of the lack of inspiration
its a shame!!! both parts could become something nice, but not together
i almost get mad for abusing a great intro like that by placing a different UNSUITED style after it... (and not even letting smal traces of the beginning style in the rest makes them even more working against each other)
well i had the trance part already worked out...but i wanted an intro...n yea i dod the intro afterwards :S
and i know it aint suited...i could have made it all ambient n no trance nor anything... but most ppl do like trance more than ambient.... but i cud do a ambient song 2 test n c whut u guys like more...thx for the review mate :)
drx peace out
great!!!
i really love this...
nice instruments, great composition... cant say anything bad about this
and the drums fit great in my opinion
its not something you hear usual... but thats also a thing i like in it
Well if you like this you should take a look at my upcoming work. I'm more focused on classical compositions. It teaches you so much about the essence of music.
I hope my next song can top all my previous stuff.
Spine Therapist
inspiring
nice what you did with sandstorm!!!
i love it
and it gives me some inspiration too
need to start at my music again... less origami, more music... :P
i have still a lot to make and learn!!!
k4p
nice
an ambient version of the freedom pulse melody :)
its so much alike, yet they are 2 different ways of spreading the same joy through music :D
the quality of the instruments could be better
but thats the only improvement i can think of!!!
i love it!!!
Thanks a lot mate! Glad you enjoyed it :P
I'm thinking after my exams, i may go back and re-make a few of my songs with the suggestions in reviews taken into account. I have to decide whether to do that or focus on new songs...
a little bit too fast
nice but... i think you choose it to be too fast
its a song wich should be fast... but i think a tiny bit slower would work out better then on this speed
1:30 - 1:50 love this part :P
Thanks for your review, I'll try to make it slower.
Peace
great melody
you have a great melody... it really touches the soul!!!
also i love the stereo effect you gave it
but there are a few things that can be better
0:30 the beat came too sudden (makes the total volume suddently jump too far up)
some sound in the change at 1:30, 2:00, 3:00 and 3:30 sounded odd
too repeative... (as an easy fix) shorting the song to 3 minutes would make a lot of difference... but its best to work more on the songstructure
good luck!!!
Thanks for your comment.
I made that one with Magix Music Maker, but I got the midi file of the melody so that I can also use it in FL Studio and I might get Cubase as well.
Actually it was purpose that the beat comes in very sudden since I wanted to let it sound some kinda like you are throwing everything away because of sadness, but you seemingly didn't like the idea there.
Maybe I can work on that sooner or later and try to do some improvments or I will keep in mind what you said for my coming tracks.
lol XD
this really is special :P
some parts where more of my liking then others but the full result is cool!!!
Well, that doesnt surprise me:P I tried to mix a few genres, so if someone who like one of the genres doesnt like the rest of the genres its only logical that the person likes the part(s) with the genre(s) of his liking:P
Im glad you enjoyed the song though! Cheers:)
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im extreemly picky on music... even if a songs style is almost perfectly alike another song i love... then i might still not like it
(sometimes problematic at my own music production... :P)
simply said... i have no great impression at... but its good made
also compaired with the original... some parts are better... and you dont have the extreem repetiveness that the original has
but its not really the kind of song i like (same about the original)
keej allright ;)
i accept your opinion haha :p
some like it, some like parts, some like nothing, .. :P
but you Do say what you think ^^
thanks for that ;-D
Hi, I'm Musical Memoirs. The memoirs that i write is one in the form of amateurish music, it's all based on my feelings, hope you enjoy. To use my music you should properly ask for it, if you plan to use it for making profit then give me an offer.
Age 32, Male
making you happy
the Netherlands
Joined on 9/9/07
Lullaby (Game music) 