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Eric van Dongen @Musical-Memoirs

Age 33, Male

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album cover design

Posted by Musical-Memoirs - August 7th, 2009


a great friend of mine has designed a album cover :)
plz tell us what you like or what you think that could be better
the included songs exemple is hard to read so im going to request a more clear version for that

i dont want to hear any bad critics!!!
(only tips how to improve)

thanks again anne!

kill4peace

ps: showing a smal low quality image because newgrounds automaticly compress the image smaller
for higher quality you can use these links:
front design
back design

update 1
idea to fix the hard to read letters is finished (only i wont show since i simply fixed it up with paint to give her the idea i had so it still looks cheaply done)
also a little dutch flag will be added in the top right corner of the front

update 2
improved my own edited version so i can show you the idea
(final version will still be better)

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now i need names for my songs harder then ever :P
i give her full time for finishing the design... but its nice to have the song names ready when she have a finished design
so any sugestion are welcome
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front ............. ............. ............. ............ ............ back

album cover design


Comments

nice background but the fonts are too cheap and cheesey looking

they can be a lot better indeed
but at least a nice background is 50% of the whole :)

very nice

thanks

Like williamreinsch said, the background is great but the text could be much better. There's at least 3 different fonts present and the colors used doesn't fit well together. Some text is very hard to see against the background, like the track list.

Everything should follow a specific theme IMHO. Also, the text on the front is pixelized.

I think some small changes would make a big difference.

well this is the first version of the design so there are a few things that probebly will change
also the hard to see text is someting that deffenitly will change and now that you say it... it is indeed pixelized
i will tell her and who knows what changes she will come up with (at least the idea of the background is now deffinitly proven to be great)

nice

thanks

and i have finaly some people talking at my news again :P