great
wow this one is nice!!!
there is not much i could give bad critics on, the things i could give on are just because those parts are a little different style then i prefer, so its not even important to mention
only i would probably make a part in it where i played a little with the main melody to make it in that part more advanced (only the idea i have might sound great in my head, but in reality it might be too hard or not sound so well)
guess i even favorite this one
also everyone has a different way of creating songs... mine are sometimes finished in short time too... i get a burst of inspiration and i can make something nice very fast... but once i loose my inspiration i get stucked and then i can spent days on it without getting any progress...
~K4P~ 22 - sunshine (after the rain) was finished in 3 hours because i had a giant burst of inspiration... but when i wanted to do things on it later to improve it more nothing happened, every try to make it better failed because i lost my inspiration to continue on the same project...
the first 3 hours were with inspiration and created 95% of the song... the next (i think i spent around) 6 hours trying to improve without my burst of inspiration gave only a little 5% of the songs progress
but there might always be some people who wants to show of by saying how less time they need to make something... so they might lie or not count some time they spend for the preparation for the project like the time you need to find the right synths... most people spend a hell lot of time to create something simple, just like you do... dont let others who might even lie about it make you feel less good or fast!
Kill4Peace